Initail Ideas Presentation and Feedback

This is our presentation on our ideas for our Psychological Thriller opening sequence.
When we presented our presentation we got the following feedback:

What was good:
The range of enigmas that the narrative gives the audience.
The title, as the ending makes the audience ask the question of who attacked who.

What to include in the opening sequence:
We need to make sure we portray the psychotic ways the antagonist loves the protagonist.
Include elements to show he is mentally disturbed and not just fallen out of love with his girlfriend and quickly moved on.
Make psychological side explicit.
Consider the amount of people around the locations and try to find out a way to have minimal disturbance.
Make test shots of makeup to make sure the blood looks as realistic as possible.

From getting this feedback, we can insure that our Thriller will be the best of our ability. Our teacher and fellow peers have given us constructive criticism and advice as to how to make the Thriller as best as possible. We have taken into consideration the main point of making the psychological character visibly psycho and not normal. We have been given ideas as to how to do this for example, smelling the protagonists coat as she walks away or out of sight. This will make the whole narrative easier to understand and not too complicated so that it doesn't make any sense.